Poetry

I came across a notebook this morning with the first poem I wrote as an adult. I would love a bit of feedback.  Take in mind this was my first attempt.

Reflections
When coming to the
end of your life, it is wise
to reflect on the the
right as well as the wrong that
you have done unto others

 

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